Terraria: Corruption Islands

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  1. Star and Moon

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    This is my Terraria Story. I'm basically writing the game with a few twists and backstories, anyways, enjoy the first chapter!

    Click this link to read:
    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8797614/1/Terraria-Corruption-Islands

    Originally I had a prologue, but it was so short that I decided to merge it with the first chapter. The transition is kind of choppy, but I'll fix it eventually...
     
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    Chapter three, entitled "Once in a Blood Moon" is now up!

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8797614/3/Terraria-Corruption-Islands

    In chapter three, Jeremy decides to map out the surface of the island, takes the whole day doing so, and wounds up getting caught outside during a Blood Moon.

    Oh, and leave your comments, I appreciate your opinions!
     
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    Pretty decent, though in chapter 2 you didn't mention Jeremy smelting the ore before "smashing the iron"
     
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    Eh, heh... heh... er... uh...

    Darn your right.
     
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    Very fun but lucky horseshoe must be on floating island right?
     
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    Yeah, right. Forgot about that... Let's just say, I'm not exactly following the game rules.

    By the way, I know progress is slow, but chapter 5 is about half-way done.
     
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    yay
     
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    I've uploaded Chapter 5! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8797614/5/Terraria-Corruption-Islands

    Here's a teaser for Chapter 6:
    OK Jeremy, you have to sit up. You've defeated a gigantic floating eye, defeating a giant skeleton twice the size of that eye shouldn't be much different, should it? Come on! You've got plenty of grenades, and, oh, CRAP.
     
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    In Chapter 5 "I throw all I've got at it, arrows, shurikens, throwing knifes, ect," ect must be etc XD
     
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    I think I should hire you as my editor.
     
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    :p You should know this. I am from Thailand. XD
     
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    WHOOPS! Another 3 month break! Today I've edited all the chapters, bringing lots of change to chapter 1 whilst adding and changing little details throughout the rest of the chapters. (Most notably I changed the dryad's name to Emerenta instead of Celestia.)

    I'll be posting up chapter 7 soon, stay tuned!
     
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    Sorry for the delay, meant to have this out in October, and had about 90% of it written in October... but... life happens. Here's chapter 7, "Elemental Swords" Introducing some more of Terraria's lore!
     
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    I LOVE this story! Please make more chapters!!
     
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    I do often tend to forget and get carried away with other projects (for instance, my work as a spriter for Terraria Avalon mod), but I will try to write as much as possible when I can! Thanks for your support!
     
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    No, thank you!
     
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