Once again, thanks everyone <3 I really didn't think it was that good when I was writing it, kind of shocked that people think it's actually good. At most I was expecting "a decent attempt" from most comments XD
A horrible chill ran down my spine as much as it did in the story. I love the build-up and the foreshadowing, you're talented.
Added part 2. I really don't think it's as good as part 1 was.. but meh. It's an idea I was tossing around, and decided what the heck. Sorry if it's not up to par though guys ._.
Nice part 2 Now what makes you think it wouldn't be up to par? Or that we ("you guys") even have a par xD
Well, the first story built a sort of "standard" (in my mind) and I didn't feel the 2nd part really reached it. Then again, I'm overly critical of all my work.. Glad someone liked it though x_x
I liked Part 2. It kept me at the edge of my seat. I wonder how Jerry disappeared. Hmm. Can't wait for more.
Holy crap. Reading parts 1 and 2 together was a bad idea. Thank God it's day time! I just wish I would forget this topic when I go to sleep :-S
Very nice work, I'm throughly creeped out. I'm tempted to log into my original character, but, I'm not going to because.. Uh, well, I really don't want to because of your creepypasta. ..And to make matters worse I'm watching an LP as I write this post and their Orb of Light ran out. Veeeeerrrrry bad timing.
finished reading the second part this, this, is a masterpiece! P.S. in part 3 (if you make it) you should buy a new cpu and then your original char appears and says "you can't run from me!!"